January 2017, or something

January 9, 2017

Happy new year to the handful of you who may or may not notice when I post something :)

Couple of small updates:

I’m shopping three new short stories at publishers at the moment, which is better than last year, and better than “none,” but nowhere near as many as it should be. I will update if any get picked up for publishing.

I have a guest post up on the Fictorians. It’s brief, but provides a short glimpse of… something or other. Read here

Squeezed out another draft

September 16, 2016

Haven’t written in 6 months. Terrible. But, another draft is in front of the critique group now!

Hopefully I’ll turn out a couple more stories before the year concludes.

That is all :p

Actually, I forgot! I have a little news:

My first story, “The Heart of Irelda” is now part of an audiobook:

The Great Tome of Forgotten Relics and Artifacts

It’s number…. 14 or so down the list. The narration is good, but hearing it really caused me to notice a few mistakes I’d made in the writing :O

 

 

I should have posted this a week or so ago, but, <insert excuse here> and didn’t.

I wanted to quickly thank everyone who read and commented on this short story. It won in the  “PROSE – FANTASY AND S.F.”  category, which doubled the money I received for it. Which sounds neat but we’re talking rather small figures ;)

Here’s where the winners are posted, if curious:

http://www.scarletleafreview.com/home/february-19-2016

As for other stories, I’ve been slacking pretty hard. I do have another short story sitting around 6k words (which is too long) that I hope to wrap a draft on soon. Be awhile before there is any news on that one, I’d say.

Story #2 published

January 15, 2016

Odd, that story #2 gets published before story #1, even though I signed the contract for story #1 months ago.

Anyway.

The market for story #2 is brand new, and I would say its presentation has some rough edges. Perhaps more than a few. Story #1 is (heh) a different story and will be out in print.  Perhaps that is why the process there is slower.  Story #2 is (I think) online only.

It is not that easy to find. Rough edges, as I said. I will paste a link. I will also say that apparently there may be a “best of” at some point at this market. It is therefore important to leave a comment on the story after reading it. I guess there is a comment button or something.

Story can be read HERE. Please leave a comment if you read it (at the magazine, not here on the blog). Even if you hate it, which many people did ;)

For what it’s worth, this story contains real people and events (as in, people I’ve seen, events I’ve witnessed). With some embellishments. The other story, story #1, due out in March, is about magic and wizards. So, totally different.

I suppose I’ve rambled enough now. Stop me before I kill again.

First news of the year

January 4, 2016

After six soul-crushing rejections, I’ve sold another short story. It is due to be published (ironically) much sooner than the last story I sold, which is still not out (that one’s due in March).

More details when it comes out.

As an aside, I seem to tend toward parenthetical phrases far too often.

Filtering

November 11, 2015

A few thoughts to jot down. Maybe I can turn some of these into an editing checklist for myself some day…

I mentioned that the last editor to reject my second story (it’s about a homeless guy) left me some helpful comments. She said the writing was “generally strong” (yay!) and had good characterization. She also said I was “filtering” and gave several examples.

As it turns out, I’ve been told in numerous critiques that I need to “show, don’t tell.” I’ve been painfully aware that telling too much is a tendency of mine, but it is hard for me to detect in my own writing. I am sort of getting the hang of detecting passive voice, but that is not quite the same thing.

I had never heard of “filtering,” but between the editor’s examples and some googling, I see now exactly what is going on and how it contributes to my tell vs. show problem.

I seriously doubt anyone is interested, but it came as a revelation to me, at least :D

Now I have a clearer picture on a specific writing pattern I can scan my work for when editing. I’m hoping that will help! And… just for my own reference if nothing else:

Filtering discussed

List of filter words

Now this is more like it!

November 9, 2015

Rejection, that is.

My second story, which was quite a departure from what I usually write, has racked up three rejections already. I may spend a little more time editing it–the last rejection came with a nice set of comments from the editor.

It’s just as well. If my second story had been accepted on the heels of the first one being accepted I might have let it go to my head!

I’ve been  a little  very slow producing stories #3 and #4. I actually started one, then got stuck, and decided to “let it lie” for a while and start on another one… which is now also stuck. :p

Wait, there’s a blog?

November 2, 2015

It’s only been a few dozen months since I posted. Hardly any time at all!

So why post now? I do NOT have exciting news that I am developing games again. Instead, I have the modest news that I have been writing. Not really “again.”

What does that mean? It means I’ve been turning out short stories. The first one has been accepted by The Great Tomes Series and is due to be published in early 2016. That’s especially noteworthy because it is the first story I’ve submitted anywhere for publication, and I found it encouraging to get a little taste of success on my first attempt. All downhill from here, right?

I’ve got several more stories running around, I’ll be sure to post if something noteworthy happens on that front. I think I’ll try posting some book reviews, too, at some point.

There it is.